16/25 You have a really well developed eye for layout and design. Your mock-up covers are excellent, but your photography on your own cover is not so powerfully effective. Your contents page is generally sound, though I feel like you have a little too much white space.
Overall, this piece is worth 19/25, but you have not fulfilled your brief, which demands 2 original images on your contents page. Please follow that with absolute care, in this case it is the difference between an A and a B.
16/25
ReplyDeleteYou have a really well developed eye for layout and design. Your mock-up covers are excellent, but your photography on your own cover is not so powerfully effective. Your contents page is generally sound, though I feel like you have a little too much white space.
Overall, this piece is worth 19/25, but you have not fulfilled your brief, which demands 2 original images on your contents page. Please follow that with absolute care, in this case it is the difference between an A and a B.